Searria H.

Hi there! Sea here to review. :D I'd like to start by offering you a big ol' Welcome to YWS! :smt039 It's a little late, but it doesn't hurt. :) ...

Hello, HighTop! First of all, I'd like to extend a very belated welcome to YWS! :elephant: I hope you are enjoying it so far. :D Now, onward! I think you ...

Hi there, Seraph! As an idea, I like this poem. I think the point you're trying to get across is interesting. Normally, I really don't care for pieces smothered in ...

Hey there, Cailey! Three cheers for writing about writing! The piece is fairly well-organized, and it flows nicely. Assuming that this is for a college admission, I have a few ...

Hi there, Dhendon! Sea here to finally complete your list of review requests! This chapter flowed well, and you have some lovely "hidden descriptions" in there. I really like the ...

Hey, Dhendon! Sea here for chapter 6. :) I appreciate you taking more time for descriptions in this chapter. As ArcticMonkey said, your descriptions gave the reader insight into your ...

Hey, Torty! Sea finally here as promised. :) You have a solid start to the story. I appreciate all of the little hints you've given us throughout the chapter without ...

Hi there, Dhendon! Sea here as requested. :) I did read the first four chapters, and enjoyed them. :) In general, I like your narrator's voice, and it's a fun ...

Hi there, Yuka! Sea here as requested. :D One positive thing that really jumped out at me was the variation in your sentence beginnings. Yay! A lot of writers have ...

Yeah. Ignore this little post. :D

Hi there, Yazi! Sorry it took me so long to respond to your review request. :) As soon as I have internet access, I'm going to click that little yellow ...

Hi there, Torty! Sea here as requested. :) You have a lot of potential here. :) I think the content is solid and, for the most part, well-developed. While you ...

Hi there, Tort! Yes, the Writers Corner is the perfect forum for this! If it bothers you, you can send it to a moderator and ask them to move it. ...

Hi, cgirl! This shall be my last review as your mentor. *wipes away single glistening tear* *cough* Onward! My fellow reviewers are referring to this as a haiku. I'm certainly ...

Hi there! First of all, welcome to YWS!! :elephant: Let me know if you ever need anything. :) For your first piece of writing, this was really good. You have ...